Dec 31, 2011

Here,Hear!

I posted these sentences,continuously on my FB..Some of my friends like them.But I'm not very sure they can understand all of these..How about you?Read my story-status below but seriously you would never understand my real story even you know the words meaning.

its a story..to lullaby u..here,hear!
black and white, book, openme

once upon a time,she walked alone at the lake..

out of the blue,she found something like a piece of burnt paper in the dirty old bottle..

she opened it slowly but eagerly wanna know what is written..

there are words..but she just couldn't understand them..how poor~

so she just walked again..continue..away and away..

tired,she sat..breathing in..hmm,so calm to be here..-she said.

suddenly she could see someone..not so far from where she sat..someone is blubbering(not sure)...

that someone was he..

then she sings a melody(insane)..as she could understand his mourns..

'is there anyone out there cares about me'?-he voiced out


yes i guess so..-she's telling lie

-hey,would you lie to him that you care?(whatever)

'oh cruel..cruel night!'-he's crazy

he thought she was his only friend..

he died..(for no reason)

she found comfort in his hand..

she slept there with his dead body..(crazy woman,indeed)

the she smiled to greet her dreams..

tearing sleep with agony rains and chalky streams

so hard to find the lights as she struggled badly..

'wake up lazy girl !! its morning already..'


and this is how this untitled 'stapen' ended..
thank you ♥
<3, art, black, blau, dark
p/s: you'll never understand
p/s 2: aku tak check grammar..so,biarkan mereka hancur~
this hurted heart gonna bo0m!

14 Pemisah Kata:

aReLaN said...

hahahah...ni btul2 ur dream or wut???

kim heeruul said...

lazy girl?

Teenager Housemaid said...

every story has their own meaning that no one can ever understand even they tried hard..:)

happy new year cik..:)

EZAD AMIR said...

wow...nice story lor...

Mohamad Azizi Md Said said...

story ni best .. tapi kurang faham .. dia bermimpi atau betul ? haha

CekbOlat-bOlat said...

hewhewhew.. crazy girl ! grammar tkyah check pun takpe.. aslkan keaslian crita ni.. ^^

Alifah Pandy's said...

kurang fham tpi sya taw crita nie best . :) trbaik laa english cik teddy .

Original CikTeddy said...

@Mohamad Azizi Md Said due2 kot..hik3

Original CikTeddy said...

@aReLaN due2 ..haha

Original CikTeddy said...

@kim heeruul kim la lazy boy!haha

Original CikTeddy said...

@Teenager Housemaid happy cik M!

Original CikTeddy said...

@EZAD AMIR tengkayu..haha

Original CikTeddy said...

@CekbOlat-bOlat haha..okeh,mmg x check pon

Original CikTeddy said...

@Alifah Pandy's tenkiu dek ifah^^